Thursday, March 1, 2012

First paragraph

“Why do I have the honor of being in every prostitution sting in New Orleans?” Detective Jett Sawyer’s voice came from the back of the unmarked van. Rustling behind a privacy screen camouflaged slight frustration.
“Because you are the only one who can fit into fishnet hose and a leather mini-skirt?” Saul answered from the front seat.


It is my first paragraph of my novel and I am sweating over it. Is it too risky for Christian fiction? Does it need to be secular fiction anyway?

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